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Maude wears simple clothes whilst the woman wears intricate outfits which is a stark contrast when you consider sexuality as Maude's sexuality isnt simple considering it is in secret and she cannot tell the woman how she feels. It is also noticable that from Maude's typical feminime dress sense her homosexuality is vaguely recognisable in comparison to the suspected heterosexuality of the woman. The part of the scene where Maude is in the bed and the woman is getting changed we see quick cuts of an eyeline match to and from the naked womans back which is positioned in the middle of a candle and a fire possibly connecting the woman to danger or sexual attraction.