Skins Feedback

Brad and Elliott
:-) Good use of images
:-) Good use of terminology
:-) Good links to theories/binary opposites
:-( Make more attractive, gifs? videos? (our video broke)
:-( Could use more on editing/mise-en-scene/music, although what is there is good
- From this feedback I can see that next time I, we, need to try and include more Gifs, another group included loads of Gifs and this made their presentation instantly more interesting throughout. There were comments on a video, however, we did have a video but we had a technical issue with the speakers, this video complimented the presentation very well and it is a shame it didnt work. It is also mentioned that we need to say more about editing or mise-en-scene.

Could make it better presented and more interesting also mention camera shots and sounds.
Nicely laid out.
Good use of pictures.
Good technical language.
From this feedback I can see we need to concentrate on camera shots and sounds which we did, admittedly, not cover that well. However, I am sure the first comment contradicts the next two!?

Terminology is well used
Need more on mise-en-scene
Mise-en-scene needs to be used more by the sounds of this really detailed feedback..

Jacob and Sarah
Character pictures, clear, informative
Titles? Layout not too good
Huge chunks of text, break it up
A bit brief
Good inclusion of all theories
Doesnt finish well
By the sounds of things here we need to break up text and conclude the presentation which are fair points. ( There were titles but ok)

To reflect on my own performance so far, I personally think our presentation was effective and we put a lot of effort into the presentation and worked well till we believed it was the best it could be. I think at the beginning of the Media course I didnt put as much effort into my blog for example as some other people did this could be because the stress of all the subjects and in particular A LEVELS we had just been faced with which was a bit daunting, However, I think now I am/have put a lot more effort into my blog which will help my learning. I think me and Roo worked well as a pair and  we didnt hardly bicker at all, suprisingly, the most important and rewarding thing we did was take time in the deciding of which tv drama we were going to use and after deliberation and choosing Skins this really did benefit us as it was something we were both interested in and knew quite a lot about.